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Sister

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I have a sister,

she's a bit older then me.
We live in a cottage,

just big enough for three.
My mother works,

there's no news there.
Always, sis and me

are in each others hair.
When I sit down

behind the computer screen,
my sister starts squealing,

like a drama queen.
She needs the time

for work from school,
smirking when mom

orders me up from the stool.
I hate her falsity,

pretending to be busy.
I know what she's doing,

acting like a hussy.
When the phone rings,

she screams "Thats for me!!"
So again I'm stuck

on the couch watching TV.
One day though,

I will have it all to myself.
SheŽll be no more
then

a picture on the shelf.
She is getting married next year,

finally leaving.
ThereŽd be no loss for me,

nope, no grieving.
I act quite perky,

show all that I am glad,
yet secretly I know,

I would miss what we had.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Sister, phone, computer, busy

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  • nightmind
    October 31, 2009
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    really good

    i like its triste solemnity. resigned hate/love


    • dutch2lips gold member
      November 1, 2009
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      yes, thank you so much for your kind words and applause!


  • poisonivystar4
    October 29, 2009

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    Aw! A typical sister bonding! Good luck in the contest!


    • dutch2lips gold member
      November 1, 2009
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      smiles, as I imagine a sister bonding would be, I have only brothers thank you for your kind words