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leaves

 
    By this time of year
    the leaves have mostly fallen,
          although
        today, as I walked to class,
     
    I saw a few still hanging on:
    They were red and orange and
      looked as crinkled as new paper
      after a day riding around
        in a hand-me-down backpack.
               


        Masha'Allah!  some say,
         
                    chance, "____________
_______________________[...]" {grumbles Camus}

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010111010001111111110010101010
(etc.)

            due simply to lack of autumn winds
        (local meteorologists argree)   
   
               
                  In any case, I just liked seeing them.

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  • Not-The-Sun silver member
    November 26
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    I saw a few still hanging on:
    They were red and orange and
    looked as crinkled as new paper
    after a day riding around
    in a hand-me-down backpack.


    I certainly love this. I think the last leaves that hold on to dear life of the tree branches are the prettiest ones : ) it's cool to see the tree so dead, yet still living.


  • acoustical
    October 29
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    oh.
    i dunno what the middle part is about, but i like your summation.