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Fleeting glimpse

Troubles of

Subtle hints

Dying love

 

Wanting needing

Now empty

Never seeing

Hearts deceive

 

Now alone

Staring blank

Love's gone

Deep contemplate

 

 

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  • EvansV
    October 30
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    again a very solid poem from you

    i like your style very deep excellent job fellow poet


  • XXbRiNgAxX
    October 28

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    Wow, I like the connotation from the first stanza. This is really good to be of so few words.