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This is School?

This place is prison
They call it school
They say it's learning
But most call it Slavery
Each cell has a prison guard
Each hollers,each yells
We try to escape
But plans always fail
I thought mom said this would be fun
Each guard takes away
The small time we get to see the sun
We're there for 8 hours
Unless the guard gives you more
But after that you get to go home
They make you walk
The whole way there,.
Come at your own risk!

Author notes

Ha Ha.Funny Right?I scribbled this out while my teacher was sayin' somethin' about slavery in history,"Blah Blah Blah....".Enjoy!!!!

Ha Ha very funny.Did you like it?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Lanasaur
    October 29
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    I enjoyed this poem, Jokes!


  • Rosefrn silver member
    October 29
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    Very very funny. I completely agree with this!

    Love it! It's amazing what one can do in history class!


  • sweetcountry
    October 29

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    good poem but as a future educator i hope to not have my students writing poems like this! still it is obvious you are gifted and probably just bored in your classes


  • lindaburns gold member
    October 28

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    There is something to be said both for expressing your true feelings and for using your Poetic License.  Whether you meant this or not, it’s a straight forward show of youthful emotions. Good work.