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[ sunrise ]

Missing image
sunrise
above the meadow
field of dandelions-
wishes held within her hands
drift gently with the spring breeze

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Option 1: Picture Credit: Dandelion

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 2

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~

    oh what a tanka;

    it has been so long since I've read a tanka so I'm thrilled to here
    "wishes held within her hands" --> a lovely fitting line

    Stay safe
    Manda


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    October 29

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    This is beautiful, good flow and sentiment. Your words and the picture are complimentary and make a lovely package. Well done my friend, Write On!

    Brother Dennis


  • Tqop
    October 28
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    Great job. I love what you did with the prompt. You took it and breathed life in to it.