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With Realization

Often times
I have stood
Alone…

Upon the battlefield
A broken plain called life
Reaching toward the western horizon

Unsure
Tentatively looking backwards
Aghast  at my own steps

Frozen
Afraid to proceed further
Knowing time rushes onward

In the stillness
Of each such moment
I have found some wisdom

On occasion
When diligently applied
My course is renewed

Over time
My steps no longer
Appear horrid

Instead
They are seen as true
Gestures of determination

With each stride
I rejoice internally
Having heard encouragement

Though couched
In the growl of a cougar
Fear subsides

Brothers
In friendship
In spirit

Niaish Na Brother

May the remaining years
Restore unto you
That which you have sown into
The lives of others

Author notes

Mike, thanks for being a part of a small cadre called family. That even at times of discord, still functions while awaiting the next turning of the wheel of life.

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  • oneheartstring
    November 26
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    a tribute to one whose encouragement has meant much in your life. Well said.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 29

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    Truly Inspirational...

    And what brilliant penning... This sincere poem looks like a winner to me, I really enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing your awesome tribute to Mike, and good luck in the contest!!
    Peace & hugs,
    xx Cyn xx