You accuse me of being sly
Yet you live in a sty
Treating our love like trash...
really makes me want an all over rash!
Could you really be my dream guy?
Saying that I would lie,
It just makes me want to die.
All this false affection,
Is really causing allot of affliction!
Could you really be my dream guy?
No I did not say that was mine,
Though tonight we had a lovely dine.
For the moment we both think of lust...
but is it really a must?
Could you really be my dream guy?
Winging love like a fly
would have some gasping "oh my!"
I'll be going for a walk,
Dont you dare think to stalk!
Could you really be my dream guy?
Watching in amusement while I cry.
This will be where I say good bye!
All the pain and sorrow
With this, there'll be no tomorrow.
You are not my dream guy!
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A contest entry
- Every Girl's Dream Guy....... by darell.
500 points, ended November 12, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
For any who have been caught unawares, something I've watched between my friends before
Comments
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lol i like it......though i would be the one to stalk (jk)
good job Dani not any spelling mistakes i could see and it was very amusing
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This is a good poem. good luck in the contes
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Nice!
I like it! Its intimate and creatively expressed
in a unique way that gives it originality.
I also get the message being conveyed.
Very nice job. Bravo!
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this was a difficult subject matter and you did very well with it.... well done on this piece and kudos to darell for bringing the topic up!
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