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Kiss Me By The Fire & Make Me Come Alive

Dxexaxd [inside]
Romance is such a lie
Poison fills my veins
Yet here I am A.L.I.V.E

ANGER like a fire raging in me
Like an ANIMAL you IcagedI me
Afraid that if for one moment
You let your (o) (o) eyes off me
I would go back to being happy

?What happened to ?ROMANCE?
xxxcrossedxxx out DELETED
After being stitched on sewn on
A name tag reading [ -MINE- ]
Ownership is what killed me
By the FIRE you made me
and our LOVE
or what we perceived it as
DIED

Here I am again
Fire reflection I noitcelfer
Begging you to REVIVE
K.I.S.S  me by the F.I.R.E. &&
Make me come A.L.I.V.E
as our Finale
GOODBYE

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  • Dead Star--x
    November 4

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    I like this, the overall tone is serious and ut seems like youve been hurt. Its anger and sadness all rolled into one.
    Dead Star--x


  • Antipodi
    October 29
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    this burns well on the page and has a dark sensuosity about ..a great read dear poet