Give it all to me.
Really, I want it all,
Even if it hurts you.
Even if it hurts ME,
Damned if it's not worth it.
Love me; give me POWER over you.
Understand that I don't care about the consequences.
Simply put, even if it hurts you, even if it hurts ME,
Take me and never take us apart.
Got to have more.
Literally NEED to have more.
Understand me, damn it?
This is all you can give me?
There's no way you can give me MORE?
Over and over-you never WILL have enough, will you?
No, you won't, but even if it hurts you, even if it hurts ME,
You should have just kept giving!
Please, darling, know this much:
Really, you can try all you ever want,
I will never let you rise above me or even come close to MATCHING me.
Don't even bother. I WILL take you back down again,
Even if it hurts you and even if it hurts ME.
Why do you pull this shit?
Really, WHY provoke me?!
ALWAYS doing this to me...But know what?
This time, even if it hurts you (IT SHOULD), even if it hurts ME,
Hell WILL fall upon you.
So, what? Expecting me to care?
Like hell I ever will. Even if it hurts you,
Or even if it hurts ME,
That's probably not going to
Happen anytime soon.
Even if it hurts you, even if it hurts ME,
NEVER go there again. You know what will happen if you do?!
Viciousness will be unleashed like what you've never known...
You have no idea what kind of nightmares I can bring you.
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C H A N E S.F O R E V E R
Dark poem, but it did help me vent some...very disturbing, actual thoughts I've had in the past. Some of it was so awkward for me to put into text-it was so personal and so...Things-I-Think-But-Don't-Want-People-To-Know... I poured things out that I was on the verge of letting overflow in my head because I'd gotten so tired of containing it in there. And for anyone that likes acrostics, take a good look at the start of each line.
Sorry, I know for the contest I should center the poem, but because of the acrostics I don't think it'll work as well...
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I know disagree with the contest anonymized. Put your name on each one, 'kay?
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Just. Wow~. The centering is good, acrostics don't do center well, so I'll allow it for it's such a great poem. Nicely written, the seven sins in one. This is a poem I will keep an eye upon. Now, do not forget your new poem, love, or I'll have to DQ it.
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Great acrostic, and an uncomfortable poem to read - yes, power over a loved one can lead to all sorts of corruption...loved the seven sins, but the voice of the protagonist is the most striking feature here.
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Thank you for a very nice comment, always glad to get them.
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enjoyed reading this one. Loved the acrostic. Well done and thanks for entering.
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Thank you; I always appreciate receiving positive comments. Especially considering the fact that you're the judge... ^_^"
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