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A politically Correct World..

A man that's been broken
hog tied and full of shame
Not deserving your grace
Not deserving your name

A heart full of lust
lies and deceit

No morals no measures
only a wolf mirroring sheep

A mouth that's unclean
untamed and unrepentant
Speaking only death to life
every word I surely mean it

Eyes of an evil soul
not regretting the things i've done
Everyday crucifying
your only begotten son

Hands of blood and nails
mocking the dreams of gates of pearl
I see you, you see me
societies version of a Godless world

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  • darlee77 gold member
    November 8
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    You have followed the prompt. Very descriptive and self judging. Thank you.

  • he sees much more in you than you think.

    Harsh, touching, bitter, and sad. I love your style but the poem breaks my heart.

  • darlee77 gold member
    October 28
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    Thank you. I will comment after judging.