In my dreams
She takes everything I have
She likes to pull me apart and smile
Unwind me
Piece
By
Little
Piece
Amanda is nothing to me
The name has no meaning
The blank space where a face should be
Remains empty
A
Shadow
Haunting
Me
I know she's smiling
As she takes another limb
I hear her laughing
With me
Have
I
Gone
Looney
I don't understand
Why this girl is here
I can't see why she's
Ripping me
Into
Tiny
Little
Shreds
A man's voice
Calls from the shadows
Familiar to me even though
It's unreal
I've
Never
Heard
It
But it sounds
Like it's been there
All this time
Every time
He's
Been
Looking
Forever
For a way
To make her stop
All this pain
She causes
To
Herself
And
Me
To you and I open my eyes
Retake my body
From this monster
I say
"Come here Amanda."
She walks forward
Into open arms
Digs deep into my soul
Searching me
For
The
Voice
Heard
I push her away
Just to escape
The pain that's hitting
Like bullets
The
Pain
Isn't
Mine
Screams fill the air
Of her and I
and another
It's him
Where
Could
I
Be
Waking up and breathing
Deeply and searching
This room for their presence
I whisper
"Come here Amanda."
...And She Emerges From The Shadows...
Author notes
Had a dream about this girl last night... Her name keeps sounding off in my head and for some reason, I feel the need to rip her throat out. Who knows? All I know is I had to write about her because I have too...Becasue she cuts me into pieces and steals my body. But when it's not enough, she shreds me. Then a man's voice that I know, but have never heard begs her to stop but she keeps going. But by the end of my dream, I'm calling to her and embracing her... She's there even when I wake...Faceless and cruel.
Anyways, sorry about the long notes. Enjoy and comment.
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Dark dream...certainly it is a great release to write this poem. I have dreams I must write about...they haunt me till I do. Always a pleasure to read you Madi...
Love Always~
Mum
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Nastasha would kick her Ass!
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And how would Natasha go about this love? XD Please explain.
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NaStasha theres an extra S in there missy!
I don't know how'll she'll do it, its all part of her Enigma! =D -
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Your crazzyyy!!!
lol well ill kill Nastasha
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Good write, dark and a bit sympathetic. Lots of heavy images. It seems this person is searching for something, but can't find it.
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and in reply to your anime thing somewhere on this site, lol!!!
I heart anime too. I have probably over 50 million pictures and drawings on my computer files. lol Alot of anime shows have begun to annoy me though.
In a couple of years, I say we meet up and run to Tokyo! I have some friends there. lol XD XD -
Your an anime crazy.
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Yup yup, that I am. Way too much time put into anime that's for sure.
You're welcome, I look forward to reading more of your writing.
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heesh
Hope it's not my Amanda...cause that would be sad.
Aside from that disturbing note, this is a very good dark write, the places you go with this one is pretty heavy. Good job luvva
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Thanks for the comment Jay. I just drempt about an amanda... I dont know why. She creeps me the fuck out though, thats for sure. Lol why would it be sad if it was your amanda?
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it would be sad cause youre dreaming about all kinds of brutal torture and murder and stuff, and Hamandar ish me friend type girly and it would sadden me greatly if she was all tortured and brutally murdered and stuff.
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