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Regret

Regret
by Darmok
10/28/09

For slings and arrows
      I have drawn and slung.
In haste have struck their mark,
                    the one.
And caused these tears
      oh love have none.  
Regret burns hot what is,
                    what's done.

There is no way to soften one's bow,
    Return the arrow to cease the blow.
Nor curve the path towards where its goes,
  Oh scarlet heart, how death doth flow.

Author notes

I recently put my big foot inmy mouth.... And regret is now my daily meal...

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  • Dalaney gold member
    November 12
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    you are amazing. I don't usually gush over a poem. My most heartfelt 'compliment' is to continue reading, and I promise you, I will. Love, L


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 29

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    excellent

    Penned excellent as always
    This should be in a contest
    It would be a winner in my book
    I posted a new one too
    Hope you come visit me
    Hugs
    Susan~~~~