Your beauty is intriguing,
And there's a mystery in your face
That beckons me to follow,
But at the same time, keep my space.
Your smile is enchanting
(When at last you let it beam!)
You're a youthful girl whose dancing,
And I'm filled, with your spirit's gleam.
I am taken by your intellect,
Your intensity, when you talk,
I could sit all day and listen,
To your each and every thought.
You are absolutely charming --
From your voice, to the way you eat!
Tall, adorable, and lovely
Stoic, natural, and sweet.
I'm so happy that I've met you;
I'm so grateful for this year.
I only wish that I could say these things
Without a hint of fear.
Andrea...
Just to say your name
Is soothing to my soul.
Andrea, you've inspired me
In ways you'll never know.
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Welcome to All Poetry dear friend loved your poem wonderful rhyme Andrea must be very special inspiration thank for sharing
s Lib xxx
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Thank you so much for your feedback!
Mike
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Welcome to AllPoetry
Whomever Andrea is you seem quite captivated by them; beautifully expressed in this you've given adoration and love simply in this
Poetically I’d recommend being careful with capitalizing the beginning of each line as it indicates a new thought each time
I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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thank you
Thank you so much for your comment... especially the tip about capitalizing the beginning of each line. I wasn't aware of that information. I'm encouraged by your feedback.
Thanks again,
Mike
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