Dumbo and Jumbo took a path
through the creek and though
we all know elephants eye's are
weak . They went into the forest
to play hide and seek .
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Who would be the first to hide .
There was only way to decide ,
they'd draw . They would go by
jungle law . The winner would
be , who drew the littlest straw
you see .
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Well Jumbo drew the shortest one
and the game of hide and seek
begun an off into the woods ole
Jumbo run ! Dumbo counted to
110 and his search for Jumbo
started then .
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Dumbo searched and searched
for days on end , but never could
he find his friend . If any of you
out there sees , ole Jumbo hiding
in those tree's . Tell him please I
pray ! It would surely make poor
Dumbo's day - Please !!
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Author notes
Contest : Prompt IS - the funny picture ... Lol //
Picture credit - AHAJOKES.COM
A contest entry
- Funny Pic Prompt by GotLilt.
700 points, ended October 31, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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How cute!!! It made me laugh as I pictured those LARGE elephants hiding in the jungle; well done!!!!!
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Thank you for visiting today !!
Yeah I had a hard time finding
that elephant myself in that
picture Lol /// Take care ,,
Big hugs , friend Easy
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This made me laugh and the picture is so cute. This would make children laugh as a childs story. Very nice write and thanks for letting me read it and enjoy it. Maybe you should write children's stories? Congrats on the trophy too.
Brook -
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Hi Brook !! Thank you for your
kind words , glad you got a smile
from this little poem ! I appreciate
your comments ...
Best wishes & hugs , friend Easy
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Oh so cute, such a cute poem this is a fun thing I am sure to read to the little ones.
Thanks for sharing your talented muse Ez, this is excellent and a delight to read.
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Good mornin Angelo ! Nice hearing
from you today , glad you stopped by !
Thank you for your great comment !!
Best regards , friend Easy
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Oh My~
This is one Precious piece my Friend and what a tale told
I could not help but chuckle also smile at the same time
Excellent take on the prompt~ also the way You took the
Reader there~ Loved it with tight rhyme too!
Felt like my inner child was in on the FUN
Congratulations on Your Trophy
Woot~
Yay!! 
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
Best wishes in all You do~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Fantastic! Congrats on the silver trophy which was well deserved. i loved this and had a great chuckle as I read. Sometimes the craziest and weirdest poems are the opnes that make you laugh the most and you certainly know how to make one laugh. It is a crazy picture you planted in my head about two elephant playing hide and seek in the forest. What a sight. Thanks for the great read and keep up the excellent work.
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Hey Dumbo..
He's behind you ! lol (sorry, couldn't resist with xmas panto season approaching)
I very much enjoyed this poem, very funny..especially that he never did find him. Congratulations on your silver win. Good poem, good rhyme and good story too.
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Thank you for stopping by today and
for your kind words ! I appreciate
it a lot !! Take care ,
Best wishes & hugs , friend Easy
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I love the internal rhyme in the humor is delightful
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Hi !! Nice to hear from you tonight !
Thank you for stopping by & for your
lovely comment !!
Best wishes , Friend Easy
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Hate the competition...
especially when it's this good. Funny stuff poet.
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Aww thanks for your kind
words my friend , coming
from you , the master and
Guru of poetry himself , I
am honored !
Best regards , friend Easy
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Lmao this is so funny and soooo cute, it would make a great kiddies story
Cherry xxx
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Gooood mornin Cherry ! Glad you
found a smile from my bit of humor ,
did you also "find" the elephant that
is ( hidden ) in the trees ? That was
soooo hard for me to find - Lol //
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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Ez Writer
Where is he?? Got to go get my glasses
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LOl easy this was a feat and jumbos freind got lost between the tress .. hope some day he will find his way back home again to his long lost loved freind hugs always well penned ♥♥
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Good mornin Angel !! Yeah poor
Dumbo ain't been the same since
-- that day ! Thank YOU for your
visit ! Grreat hearing from ya !!
Best always & big hugs ,
Friend Easy
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Just adorable!
I loved it Ez - so cute. I like this side of you my
friend! Keep 'em coming!
Warm Wishes Always,
Marilyn
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Hi Marilyn !! So nice of you to
visit today ! Thank you for the
visit and the lovely comment !
Glad I brought a smile to you ..
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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LOL You are too much my friend lol What a fun and humorous poem! I don't see the elephant but I see a poodle a sheep and what I think is a teddy bear Jk, Loved it! Best of luck to ya.
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Hi Linda !! Yeah that elephant sure
knows how ta hide , I can't see him
for all the trees ! Lol //
Glad you got a smile from this !!
Best always & hugs , Friend Easy
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Enjoyed this, am still chuckling! It was light and funny... just what I needed after a long and serious day!
Thanks for sharing a moment of levity!
Good luck in the contest.
Anya
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Thank you Anya for stopping by
and for your inspiring comment !
Glad my poem brought you a
smile today !! Take care ,
best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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lmao want a cute story my friend, I;m still smiling. best of luck in the contest
Sean
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Hi ya Sean ! I knew you'd kinda get
a smile out of this , goood prompt .
I still can't see the elephant , i'm
still a lookin ... Lol //
Best regards , Friend Easy -
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lol
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LOL...ok what are you smoking and I need to remove that from you now...this is too cute...just put a mouse in his path, he'll come out. Excellent. Blessings.
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Hi Denise !! I'm ah ; ah , not smokin nuthin
[ fanning the smoke away //]
Maybe a tiny roach is all .. just Kidding Lol ///
Hey thank you for dropping by , glad you
got a smile from this poem !! Luv your comment !
Best wishes & hugs Sis !! Bro Easy
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