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splitting syllables in soberity

i glanced through the veil my hair left on my face
trying to find how i got in this place
my head felt split open and my mind was throbbing
i remember bits and peices and feel like sobbing
the scene from last night drifts slowly through my mind
i remember the thrills and fun i hadn't left behind
the touch of your fingers caressing my hips
your toungue dancing across my lips
the graceful movements as your clothes hit the floor
and the feel of your body as you move to close the door
the softness of the bed as it comes to meet my back
your body lies atop me as i find nothing do you lack
the spasms of happiness that go past intoxicated
i cant remember anything i hated
then suddenly hurt washes through my entire being
My spine arches in pain  as i look through eyes unseen
A deep crimson gurgle echos from my throat
I lay there dying slowly as you put on your sable coat

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