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Lavender Blush

Cerulean sky gives way to variegated

shades of sunset as it passes its shadows

across lavender fields of a warm California

summer evening.

 

Shades of magenta, and fiery orange fade,

fade into misty, misty light dusty pink,

as the tones in my face become flushed

with the hand on my shoulder.

 

"Early to bed; another day of field work

and harvesting the crop" he says to me softly

but knowing him as I do, that is the last thing

on his mind.

 

Indigo skies make no need of drawing blinds;

only the outline of lovers faces as the

moon shines smiling her glow through

lace edged curtains.

 

The cosy warmth of the duvet and his arm

around me all night, showed that same

light pink violet on my countenance,

as fresh as a newborn baby;

soft, soft gentle light rose.

 

Morning dawned as night vanished, reawakening

with a sound of the rooster; our alarm

clock for a new day, the cirrus clouds forming

a streak of crimson lake across the azure sky.

Author notes

Prompt: Lavender Blush...A romantic way of showing this unusual light violet shade...The shade is as a little babies skin, as a sunset or sunrise in that light pink we so remember...or as a woman's face when she blushes..A romantic way in this write to describe lavender blush..Hope you like it..

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  • Jalalbad gold member
    2 days ago
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    I love every beautiful line.
    Judy


  • ms-cuddles silver member
    November 23
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    this is so sweet. i'm glad that you posted this here or i might have never had the honor of reading this. congrats on the trophy. hugs~ cuddles


  • perfectsunset gold member
    November 15

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    Such gorgeous scenery portrayed
    here and soft theme throughout.
    A lot of emotion and love;
    sweet ambiance within as well.

    I adore this piece Rose!~

    Best of luck & thanks for entering

  • Well..this is one of your best dully filled with the stiong imagination and very strong message in it..love it..well done dear friend..


  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    November 9
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    Touching

    Such lovely colors and words to go to sleep on, a lovely poem indeed.


  • John BoSox
    November 6
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    Seductive No more words to say..I give in...beautiful poem..I am moved........truly..... Wow......congrats




    John


  • islekine gold member
    November 6

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    This is lovely!

    Such a soft, mellow feeling...beautiful imagery!
    Love the colors!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


  • Xianaria gold member
    November 5
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    Oh, this is gorgeous. I love the images you've painted within this write!

    Best wishes in the contest!

    ~ Tim


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 5

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    I find this so refreshing,
    you have wrote a beautiful poem Mom.
    I have so much respect for your talent.
    you have a knack for detail!! this simply
    gorgeous

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • who iam
    November 4

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    A sensual write that paints beautiful pictures in the mind.
    Passion and warmth that eminate throughout as the night turns into morning!
    "Indigo skies make no need of drawing blinds;
    only the outline of lovers faces as the
    moon shines smiling her glow through
    lace edged curtains."
    If only the moon could talk.
    Great write.
    Best wishes with the contest.


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 2

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    Lovely composed...


    Outstanding, inspiring and romantically sublime, "Lavender Blush" flows on a river of multi colors waters to an ocean of lexical beauty to picture emotions of magical passions.

    I read a wonderful poem... "Lavender Blush" sings with creative voice.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU



  • Amera gold member
    November 1

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    This is really beautiful as you have painted the pastel shades perfectly in this woven masterpiece. I love you auntie!

    Love,
    Amera


  • penman gold member
    October 31
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    excellent

    such a beautiful creation. So very touching and descriptive. Best of luck in the contest


  • maktub
    October 31

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    Beautiful, so beautiful...I felt as if a soft, contented sigh had settled over me...I liked it, I more than liked it, I loved it...SO beautiful...

  • Just4u
    October 31
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    Sunrise, sunset
    Sunrise, sunset
    Swiftly flow the days
    Seedlings turn overnight to sunflowers
    Blossoming even as we gaze


    • Rose Angel gold member
      November 1
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      Thank you all...and Ed...

      Thank you all for comments.
      and Ed for the words from"Fiddler On The Roof"
      Very appropriate for the poem!


  • crivanea silver member
    October 31
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    such beautiful colors!!! ohhh....this is just lovely


  • Antipodi
    October 30
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    Wow wow One can so visualise this scenery and feel the love that brims from it dear poet


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 30

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    Sis
    Lavender tones so colourful and softly muted
    The imagery is beautiful
    Setting of each scene penned perfectly
    Gentle as it is romantic
    Truly a wonderful poem
    Much love and good luck always

    Julie xx

  • JToddUnderhill
    October 30

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    Bravo...

    ..... having witnessed several California sunsets I was transported by this poem back in time to when I was ten years old and a summer sunset I witnessed on vaction at a cabin in Tuolumne that was filled with all of the colors mentioned in this piece. This was a fond memory and I am glad you brought it back to the front of my mind. Thank you very much!

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