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The Feeling

you ever get that feeling?
the one where you're perfectly fine
then the pulsating painfull movement vibrates
through your temples
your stomach tosses and turn like a ship lost a sea
you feel anchorless, helpless
like you just never were good enough
and now you're just staring
staring out the car window
absolutely focus on the guard rail
that just looks like a solid strip of grey
your back twitches and aches
feels like the knife stabbing you repeatedly in the back
you ever get that feeling?
the one where you're just about ready to cry
but you just cant let go enough to let the tears break
through your walls
you feel so lost
you dont even care that you ran out into the road
or how you tripped
and now your face death right in the face
you ever get that feeling?
that feeling how everything you ever worked for
is now about to be gone and disappear to nothing
...............
well that how i feel my love
when you say you're thinking about leaving again.

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