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snowing and cold

My boots are drenched
my cane is froze.
my hair has iceicles in it!
red is my nose.
welcome back Snow!

Now that you've decided
to play hide and seek with the sidewalk
I find myself falling
and always lost
Go away  Anow!


Though you may be pretty
You are extremely cold
you muffle my hearing!
You make things die and look old
You suck Snow.

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  • Evinde
    October 28

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    I loved the second stanza especially. The last line is humerus and cute! A quick read-aloud could fix any issues. Nice job feel lucky, it never snows here!