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the

 

 

today, I saw my reflection

for the first time in

two weeks.

 

 

My God,

 

 

 

I do look sick.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • notorious gold member
    October 29

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    I really dig how the "My God, I do look sick." warrants "proper grammar" and capitalizations, whereas the beginning begins off as lowercase.

    This is so honest (and damn good)

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  • pathetique.
    October 28

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    I love it.
    In reference to what you said in your journal, it doesn't matter who you please. Write for you and you'll make everyone helpful.
    Despite that, I still worship your poetry.
    One a day sounds amazing... November will be an awesome month.


    • metanoia
      October 28
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      Thank you so much. Support helps and I don't expect to write everyday, but I damn well will try. I am a bit taken aback that you like my poetry so much considering I think you're a much better one than I, and I'm pretty happy to see you back on AP again.

      Here's to writing even though it doesn't make sense.


    • David. Enjoy.
      October 28
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      I agree wholeheartedly. I'm pretty excited to read. It makes me kinda wanna do it, too...

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