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Your little child

I am a child to your eyes
when I am not a lost sheep
Do you laugh at my antics?
Do you think ‘Not again?’
I hope, no I know that you
see deep into my heart
you see how much I love you

You know I am far from perfect
but I do try hard,
yes you know that too
I try to be what you would want
me to be, to do what you would
want me to do
You watch as I fail and then try again
You know my inner most desires
Do you frown?
You know my weaknesses
How emotional I am
You know my strengths
You have watched me grow
into the person I am today
What do you see?
Why you see little me!

Author notes

I think of Him as my God but also as my father/dad so I think He would see me as his daughter trying hard to be good but not always succeeding

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  • Evelyn
    November 10

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    very very good. I enough your poem very much. thank you for sharing.


    • Cherrylv
      November 10
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      Evelyn

      Thank so much for the kind comment, so glad you liked my poem

      Cherry xxx


  • Denerica
    October 29

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    Correction, chastisement out of love, inspiring, humbling. Well done. Blessings.


    • Cherrylv
      October 29
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      Denerica

      Thanks so much for reading my poem I'm so pleased you liked it

      Cherry xxx


  • darlee77 gold member
    October 28
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    Thanks. I will comment after the contest.

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