You Said You'd Keep Licking,
Until My Flavor Was Gone.
Your Words So Sickly Sweet,
They Can Only Cause Cavities.
Ones Far To Big To Fill.
You're At My Stick,
I Have No Bubblegum Center,
So How About You Chew On This Thought?
My Flavor Faded Fast.
Obviously We'd Never Last
Because No Matter How Hard I Try,
I Could Never Be Your Everlasting Gobstopper.
PS: I Wish I Hadn't Have Listened,
When You Were In Bed With Me.
Buts Thats When You Spoke The Loudest,
Saying All The Words I Was Dying To Hear.
Go Ahead & Cross Anything You Like,
It Wont Make It Any Less Of A Double.
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Sexual Powertrip
I'm sorry for the way I treated you
I'm stuck in my ways to just run
In the opposite way when things get comfortable
I'll keep on licking till your flavor is gone
It's getting more impossible
To keep a straight face
And be trusted with
I love you
Don't trust my words when I'm in the bed with you
I'll bring the message, but the message gets lost
Yeah you opened your legs and maybe
I promised you
You didin't notice that my ankles were crossed
Can you show me how to treat someone?
I don't recall ever learning how
Because I keep fucking up
I keep fucking up
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This Was Actually A Reply, to the song sexual powertrip. by blue october -
Geez Lady!
You're awesome!
I never thought a metaphor about candy could make me feel emotions.
This made me sad and you transmitted a clear message.
Albeit maybe not the one you wanted, it was still clear.
I got this:
He promised some things, and his words were too good to be true.
(condensed)
awesome!
5 stars
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I like the use of sweets and chocolate in your poem, sounds like a bitter msg to an ex. Fav line 'I could never be your ever lasting gobstopper'
love it, excellent -
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funny thing is (:
He isn't an ex.
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