You Said You'd Keep Licking,
Until My Flavor Was Gone.
Your Words So Sickly Sweet,
They Can Only Cause Cavities.
Ones Far To Big To Fill.
You're At My Stick,
I Have No Bubblegum Center,
So How About You Chew On This Thought?
My Flavor Faded Fast.
Obviously We'd Never Last
Because No Matter How Hard I Try,
I Could Never Be Your Everlasting Gobstopper.
PS: I Wish I Hadn't Have Listened,
When You Were In Bed With Me.
Buts Thats When You Spoke The Loudest,
Saying All The Words I Was Dying To Hear.
Go Ahead & Cross Anything You Like,
It Wont Make It Any Less Of A Double.
Comments
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Geez Lady!
You're awesome!
I never thought a metaphor about candy could make me feel emotions.
This made me sad and you transmitted a clear message.
Albeit maybe not the one you wanted, it was still clear.
I got this:
He promised some things, and his words were too good to be true.
(condensed)
awesome!
5 stars
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I like the use of sweets and chocolate in your poem, sounds like a bitter msg to an ex. Fav line 'I could never be your ever lasting gobstopper'
love it, excellent
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