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My magic number

I have a number, It is quite long
In fact my number, will go on

Never once a pattern found
For ever on my numbers bound

No one knows when it will end
but to this number I shall tend

I only know it 5 digits long
But still I sing it in a song

My favorite number; that is pi
three point one four one five nine!

Author notes

..I think this will make you laugh..

awful.. but kinda funny!

What do you think? Is it really as bad as I think?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Abandonedxx
    November 1
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    Great, really great, but Pi actually doesn't go on forever. it stops somewhere in the millions or billions... around there.

  • midnightblue1272
    October 29

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    Cute.

    Not awful at all, young poet. It's cute. This is the first poem I read about pi. You made it simple & to the point. Good one. Great to see you writing again.