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Taking over

Depression
like a dark cloud in front of me
Seeps in through my mouth
and fill my lungs

Poisoned thoughts
darken my mind
A gray drape cover my eyes
and leave me blind

Spinning down
in an eternal spiral
of guilt
and regret

Suicidal thoughts
root and start to grow
Will anyone even miss me? 
I guess I'll never know







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