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Great Grandpa

Did you say cheese
my favorite is cheddar
oh, you want me to say cheese
now my face is getting redder

My great grandpa is having this contest
because he thinks I'm pretty
he put my picture on here
so please write a nice little ditty

I am the apple of his eye
or so I am told
we have so much fun
even when its cold

I hope you are not bored
and had a good time
writing something funny
while trying to make it rhyme



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Photo Prompt- Rhyming or Not
Congratulations great grandpa, she is a cutie

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  • Jesann gold member
    November 11
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    I'm sure she is the "apple of his eye", how could she not be, she's so cute !!!
    A fun little ditty you have penned.


  • OldBear34 silver member
    October 28
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    Interesting Take!

    Your poem showcases both an unobtrusive rhyme scheme and a credible story. I enjoyed it!