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I can't believe myself some times.

I hate the way you look at girls,
the way you say my name.
Quite frankly I can't stand you
when you're laughing in my face.

I hate the fact your fingers
always linger far too long.
The way you lack propriety,
but still open all my doors.

I hate it when you worry
if I don't show up on time.
The way you hassle all my lines
if I haven't replied.

I hate a lot of things
that you always seem to do.

Which is why I can't understand
why I'm falling for you.

Author notes

Prompt:
I don't know why I'm falling for you.

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  • Topnotchsy
    November 8
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    Nice write here and a nice take on the prompt. The poem captures the confusion that our emotions sometimes cause well.


  • Sweet-Sins
    October 31
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    this is a good poem
    sorry i didnt comment during the contest.
    it was a good poem tho
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