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Love Transcends

FOR BELOVED DESIRE

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BEYOND THE WORLDS OF TIME
YOU ARE LOVE MOST SUBLIME;
WITHIN THESE SPOKEN WORDS
LET THE SONGS OF TRUTH BE HEARD!

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  • Desire gold member
    November 1

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    Bless Your Heart!!

    Oh My ~ You know when I inhale Your Energy...You have a way with Brevity that is Amazing~ hard to describe in words for it is one to be Felt
    This swells my eyes and when I came back yesterday, I imagined the Love floating within the walls of AP~ so Happy to know there were pieces penned for me to read~ to lift me from the ground - weightless~ I was in the hospital thinking of how I miss everyone~ elated to get online to read this Gem~ You are so Precious!!
    I am Honored You penned for this contest and what a Treasure indeed
    Also Adore the Category- NEW DAWN for indeed a NEW DAWN has approached
    Love the message which touches through flesh to the core
    Thank You Precious Spirit~ I will remember what You have done for me, always
    You took the time to write when You could have chosen to do something else
    and Your words...bring Calm also Soothe like balm How I want to say ditto for each person brought a Gift Unique~
    Keep that quill dancing my Friend
    Please continue to Bless the masses
    I'm Blessed to have You in my Life!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in Sandy's contest~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 31

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    A beautiful sharing that just sums everything up in a few words..BRAVO!
    Thank you for sharing this; I know it will touch her heart!!!!!


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    October 29

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    Bountiful~Wise...


    Blessed are those that understand the colors of the rainbow of friendship.

    "Love Transcends" sings to gratitude and friendship diffusing the scent of love; honoring our beloved friend Poet.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Denerica silver member
    October 29
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    Amen...short and sweet and still she would know. Well done. Blessings.