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Blame and Stare

I turn on the news and I blame and stare.
I feel so sad for those poor victims out there.
I know that God does care,
But these last days are so hard to bear.

She woke up today and found out her loved one died.
He was caught in an explosion that happened outside.
She looked out the window and broke down and cried.
She was hoping that one day she would be his bride
She tried to run but where will she hide?
When will her pain subside?
People are suffering worldwide.

I turn on the news and I blame and stare.
I feel so sad for those poor victims out there.
I know that God does care,
But these last days are so hard to bear.

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  • Macsword
    October 29

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    Yes,

    God does care. But he is biding his time while we who know Jesus try our best to bring another soul to the kingdom. Your poem shows your understanding. Keep writing poet and do not lose heart.


  • Englandgirl2008
    October 28
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    This was so sad.
    I almost cried.
    Your an amazing poet.
    Take care