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So Sweet

I need some solid courage,
Not artificial stuff.
I need to tell you something,
Before it eats me up.
I find it hard to believe,
That you can't tell everything.
It runs across my face,
Whenever you're near me.

I got something to say,
About you and me,
I got a secret hiding,
Something so sweet.
So sweet, so sweet,
Your eyes might end up tearing.
So sweet, so sweet,
I'll kiss your ear while whispering...

I need you to understand,
You might just be needed.
Need is a funny thing,
Considering...
You don't need love to survive,
You need it to be happy.
Can't you see me struggling?

I got something to say,
About you and me,
I got a secret hiding,
Something so sweet.
So sweet, so sweet,
Your eyes might end up tearing.
So sweet, so sweet,
I'll kiss your ear while whispering...

-Glenn Gutkowski

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Its a short, catchy, swingy ty[e of song written with some simple if not repetitive chords.

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  • SageyBaby
    October 29

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    this is so sweet and just lovley. If only you showed this to her It flows so well, and I can feel how desparate you are, for her to know how you feel. I love the "I'll kiss your ear while whispering" very beautiful and romantic. Sometimes when people write about love, or how they feel it sounds so cliche but you make it beauttiful and enchanting. I love your work, and I love this piece , It's very endearing and literally sweet! Your in need for her to know how you feel, exactly.
    I hope it all goes well for you