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Lotus Leaf Tea

It's been a long night, and my fingers smell like tobacco. I spent over an hour on my balcony, taking things apart, and piecing them back together. I went through three cigarettes, which, as I've mentioned before, I detest. I make a habit to drink this tea whenever I smoke, because it's a detox for the nicotine.

I smoke to remind myself that I'm a hypocrite, and that I do things that are in no one's best interest. I drink Lotus Leaf tea, because I want to clean up and fix things. It's a hard taste to get used to, and it takes time. Gradually, I'll make the confrontations, admissions, and apologies. For now, I continue to make smoke clouds, and look for repentance in lotus leaves.

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  • Danilove
    November 13
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    wow

    I like how you worded this one. And I like how you made similarities.very well written.

  • Cermionie
    November 8
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    I like your idea here. It's interesting.