Darkness sweet darknes
Take me away
Deep into your land of the wonder
Darkness sweet darkness
Please take me away
Into the darkness
Pull me under
Darkness sweet darkness
Pull me close to you
Keep me hidden from sorrow
Darkness sweet darkness
Take me by your side
No longer do I wish to hide
Darkness sweet darkness
My love for you grows
Deep in my heart
As my my pulse will slow
Darkness sweet darkness
Sing me your lullaby
Give me your hand
And I'll take the chance
To fly
Darkness sweet darkness
I am all yours
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- Anything and everything by bunnyslasher157.
900 points, ended November 11, 97 entries
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Okay, I really like It. I like how you repeat "Darkness sweet darkness" I only have thing to say to fix. I couldn't keep my eyes on the text, because It's all spaced out. You should put them in stanzas. Otherwise good job.
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