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the damage is done

Hateful stares damage my heart
and malevolent words rip it apart
Actions speak louder than words
or so they say
But what you said just now
put my thoughts in disarray

Words get strait to the point
A point that punctures
A statement that tears
A sentence that devastates

A tide of emotions
streaming down my face
What did i do to become so
WEAK and a bitter disgrace

You've broken my heart
its torn and tattered
bloody and battered

You have left me alone
alone in this darkness
that has become my mind
Trapped inside with no way out
damned to die
weak
tears pouring down my face

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just some random stuff not so good will revise later

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  • BeachBum1
    October 28

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    great write

    powerful, thought provoking and deep, we've all been there. raw and honest emotions flood from you i really enjoyed looking into your soul keep writing!