You take me in your arms
and tell me i'm yours but then
you rip my insides out with your
bare hands.
You gut me like you do an animal
you hold my bleeding body close
as the blood runs down your front
as you laugh sadistically.
You fuck me like an animal
you take my very soul to the pits
of hell as you torture my body
from limb to limb i bleed.
You told me you'd save me
you would help me,
well i guess you did but
not the way i was hoping.
You tore me appart
and fucked me like an animal
now i'm laying here bleeding on
your floor with a look of horror.
Author notes
You let me violate you, you let me desecrate you, you let me penetrate you, you let me complicate you. Help me, I broke apart my insides. Help me, I've got no soul to tell. Help me, the only thing that works for me...help me get away from myself.
Chorus: I want to fuck you like an animal, I want to feel you from the inside. I want to fuck you like an animal, my whole existance is fraud. You got me closer to god.
You can't help my observation, you can't help the hate that it brings. You can't help my absense of faith- you can't help my everything. Help me, you tear down my reason. Help me, so sex I can smell. Help me, you make me perfect. Help me think I'm somebody else.
Chorus.
*CLOSER- NINE INCH NAILS
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Comments
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"You tore me appart" APPART should be APART
Other then this it was a very well written poem it fit the prompt perfectly. You did a good job on this piece. Thank you for sharing it with us -
So vivid and immediate.
Enjoyed your write.
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Good write, quite sick. I love it.
thanx for entering.
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You let me violate you, you let me desecrate you, you let me penetrate you, you let me complicate you. Help me, I broke apart my insides. Help me, I've got no soul to tell. Help me, the only thing that works for me...help me get away from myself.
Chorus: I want to fuck you like an animal, I want to feel you from the inside. I want to fuck you like an animal, my whole existance is fraud. You got me closer to god.
You can't help my observation, you can't help the hate that it brings. You can't help my absense of faith- you can't help my everything. Help me, you tear down my reason. Help me, so sex I can smell. Help me, you make me perfect. Help me think I'm somebody else.
Chorus.
*CLOSER- NINE INCH NAILS
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