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Author notes
prompts: do no wrong by thirteen senses & "i have a freudian victimization complex"
find the lie:
--i've rewritten my novel three times
--i dropped out of college when i was 19.
--i have never cut myself.
A contest entry
- i've got nearly eighteen years of knowledge{2} by winterbound..
400 points, ended November 8, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Fluff is great, but it really doesn't help; honesty is the best policy.
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mm an engaging poem..2 truths and 1 lie....so which is the lie ?..dunno..but the last one if its a lie then it is the truth.....i hope not......take care
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lol, okay this is a tuff one, cause idon't really know you outside you poems but i will have to take a guess, the first one and the second ones are truth i think, keep it flowing
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Brevity, minimalism...you do that so well. I like the idea of putting the personal stuff out there, straight up. Perhaps embellish the song reference somehow, however brief.. Okay, the lie...I'd say the novel. Hell, at my age I'm still just nearing the end of draft #1!! Thank you for being such a great presence on AP. Good luck w/contest!!!!!!!!
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song: do no wrong by thirteen senses.
two truths, one lie:
- i have a 'Freudian' victimisation complex.
if you're not sure what this means exactly, ask.
i've stopped putting effort into my education, so i can be loved.
i don't know who my family is.
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Freudian victimisation complex?
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