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For Jesse



your advancement
oh, so sweet, so...
intoxicating
when you pull me close
my whole body tingles softly
a warm ecstasy
your soft, strong hands
lightly trace lines on my bare skin
then firmly bring me closer
my arms around your neck
bringing your lips to mine
and I softly muss your hair...
one browned hand
reaches up and cradles my chin
infinity in your dark eyes
takes me in
makes me whole
"Babe, I love you."
a whisper,
a touch against my ear
soft as petals
I quiver with longing, with love
"I love you too."




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10-27-09
...leaves me breathless....

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