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A Child

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I pray He sees me

as a lost child,

I pray He will tame me,

make me meek and mild.

 

I pray He sees me

when I rise from a fall,

I pray He knows I love Him

most of all.

 

I pray He sees me following Him

although I am far behind,

I pray He knows when I get lost

I will forever seek and find.

 

I pray He knows I feel 

His love and light inside of me,

and that I struggle constantly

to obtain humility.

 

'I pray He knows I love Him

most of all'

 

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  • darlee77 gold member
    November 8
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    This is very pretty and well written.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 1
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    this is a heartfelt for Jesus sees your heart and soul and smile upon your beauty in heart for you are a blessing to behold dear freind Hugs Always Angel♥♥

    I have read already and read again hun♥♥


  • drifting cloud silver member
    October 31
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    This has a very smooth rhythm to it and leaves the reader with a warm feeling.


  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 30

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    according to your write I think that Jesus sees Himself in you rainbow. You are a meek child but not lost, never. much luck in contest
    love


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 29

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    Love this message you penned for the words deep penned with in and the beauty shines in the heart with prayer and Gods hand touches the face in heart gave well penned hun hugs Angel♥


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    October 29
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    Straight-forward and loving,
    the perfect prayer,
    so reflective
    of you!!!

    M-c

  • goalsv
    October 29

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    So beaufiful, a great way to tell God that you love Him even thru imperfection and all. Very poetic and profound. Nice job of writting.


  • marandah gold member
    October 29
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    This one says it all

    I could see this on a beautiful wall hanging - it reminds me of the 'Serenity Prayer'.

    Fantastic job!

  • hezakiah
    October 28
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    Nice prayer/poem. Thanks for sharing it.

  • darlee77 gold member
    October 28
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    Thanks for the entry. Will comment after judging.


  • Denerica silver member
    October 28

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    Amen! Dear sis, this is humbling just like your ending says to obtain humility. That we continually see Him in us, and Us in Him. Excellent.Blessings.

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