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cheers to the nearly deported

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everyday I feel lucky
to see his face

clouds may obscure
but his smile

still

lights my sky






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  • Naridill
    November 1

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    I agree with AN In a good way - I love the simple but effective imagery here. You take minimal but don't leave us with minimalistic poetry. Stunning effort! Goodluck.


  • jantastic gold member
    October 30
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  • knock
    October 29
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    time has told me
    everything's gonna be alright

  • Rowan gold member
    October 28
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    perfect...
    I miss you here more, but the less I see of you, the happier I know you are.
    sigh.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    October 28

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    damned good too... i don't know what i would have done if knock had called on tuesday to say it had all gone tits up!!!
    so glad so glad


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 28
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    I must echo the lovely Yvette here.


  • Yvette Champ gold member
    October 28
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