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Uncensored Thoughts II (Tension, Anger, Frustration)

Everything is red
and I can feel my brains exploding from the back of my skull
and everything is that same color
everything is red

Every phrase that comes out of you mouth is a strain
A strain on my conciseness
A strain on my ears
A strain on my...
Good God! Could you just shut the fuck up already!

The voices, they wont stop
The voices, they aren't in my head
I can hear them all around me
Every thing, all at once
Every voice sounds like it is right next to me
Every voice sounds like it is right in my ear
Every voice is an attack on my train of thought
Attacking my concentration, and all of them are in focus
All of them I can hear all at once
A chorus of annoyance

And as I sit in this class room
As I sit here tired, hungry, and frustrated
I imagine my fist striking the sleek screen of this apple computer
Busting the synthetic glass
Sparks fly and pissed blood runs out of my knuckles
and down the grooves of my clenched fist

I can't stand to hear another word
I can't stand another word out of your pissing mouth
And until you shut the fuck up
And let me make peace
I will never be able to fully let go

Author notes

I wrote this as the emotions came over me, not before, not after (how the hell would I do it before anyways)

This isn't directed towards a specific person, but everyone. Everyone that has been a strain on my life lately.

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Comments


  • Blood N Tears
    October 29

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    Sorry you feel this way. At least you're letting at all out though. I know what its like, every noise just... bursting in your ear, annoying the hell out of you.... Great write, glad you let it out.

    Lillie


  • Fallen-Thumper
    October 29

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    wow this is a strong piece and says a lot
    i can definatly se how you were feeling
    hope you are okay now, if not im here
    -penguin-


  • Inspired By Till
    October 28

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    Damn man, this is intense--you were pissed! Awesome write though, glad to see you could get pissed like this--