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the Ride

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Black leather,
Cream white lace
High heel boots
Open space
Hot power between my thighs
Longing for another ride

Wind blown
Heated skin
Bodies pressed
Curves bend
Legs tighten
Softly moans

Freedom
Of loving you again…



Author notes

in reply to The Voice Of One's RIDE THE WIND.http://allpoetry.com/poem/5833595

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  • Maximilliano
    November 12
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    Nicely done...flowing...Max


  • paul claxton
    November 2

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    oh baby ,i lke it,gonna lie down in a darkened room


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 1

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    there's nothing better than a steamy erotic ride
    Nice sensual piece with the right amount of heat..sizzle effect
    Your imagery is great within the brevity of this write
    you have much talent..I'm awaiting more..Write On!
    David..


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 29

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    Nothing like a nice ride, eh?
    Very sultry and erotic; a fine sharing of the steam
    All the best to you in all your writing endeavors!
    ~Heavenly~

    • PurringKitten silver member
      November 1
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      Heavenly Angel

      thank you kindly Heavenly and so pleased you liked the little steam


  • carl dunford
    October 28

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    Wow! the only way to ride. loved it and thank you for your comments.

  • TheProdigyPoetWolf
    October 28
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    nice

    this is cool


  • Sara Khan
    October 28

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    The first stanza is very very impressive.

    'Hot power between my thighs
    Longing for another ride'
    The lines are full of erotic fervor


  • The Voice Of One silver member
    October 28

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    sits astride and breaths in deep, lets ride the wind till we curl up and sleep.

    You got some heat going on kitten,, purrrrrrrrrrrrrring loudly here.....

    Loving it,,,,loving it,,,,,loving it.....

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