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…and I’ve fallen for h i m

down the mirage of years
the hushed symphony of him
slowly left its eternal notes
on the beating oyster - locked within my ribs


entwined in my every thought
his being has breathed me into
- the origami of the unvoiced love

floating in the midnight dust of dreams
I’m no one but just an unplayed melody now -
who waits to be harped by h i m...
 
                 
like a che tace poem
I lie scattered
on the pages of his sighing diary
…and weave another trance
when he’d paint the lettered being of mine
with the acrylics of his whispering lunacy…





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*Che tace [Italian word]: silent

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  • Kathraina gold member
    November 14

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    Wow, breathtaking imagery invoked here by your word usage! Brilliant job with the construction of this piece, its comes off the page and unfolds in my mind's eye effortlessly. Nicely done



    bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate


    • F a t i m a
      November 15
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      awww thanku sooo much for such a shweet comment of yours!! ^ ^