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Hey Grandpa


I look a lot like you
guess that comes as no surprise,
seems we both have mischief..
written in our sparkling eyes

My cheeky little grin
warms every heart with smiles,
but Grandpa, now  I've "cheesed"
will you play with me awhile ?





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  • reveller silver member
    November 17
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    This is such an adorable poem. I never had a grandpa, the one you wrote about sounds sweet.


  • Tzipora
    November 11

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    I look a lot like you
    guess that comes as no surprise,
    seems we both have mischief..
    written in our sparkling eyes

    My cheeky little grin
    warms every heart with smiles,
    but Grandpa, now I've "cheesed"
    will you play with me awhile ?

    - i know im quoting the whole poem, but im just trying to show you that i really liked this write. well done.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 8

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    aww this is so beautiful,
    loved the endearments penned

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • esroddo silver member
    November 8

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    Oh how sweet

    I can feel the innocents of a child. Adoring his or her Grandpa.
    The write is short but so very inspiring. Thanks for sharing LISA


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 8
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    This si too cute

    I love the poems where children are talking with your grandpas .Loved it


  • condor gold member
    November 6

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    This is such a wonderful write. I went and had a look at the picture and can see the purity of your words through the eyes of a child. Got me smiling. A short little piece but one that said much.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 1

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    Cute little write....and so appropriate for the picture...I wish you well in the contest!


  • wuzisname
    October 30
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    FANTASTIC!

    Just love this write. Excellent short and so full of love.


  • humblpye gold member
    October 29

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    Well if that's you in the picture, you sure do have a cheeky lil' grin!
    Nice job Anne, thought you was camera shy...?John


  • Cup-a-Joe
    October 29
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    Awesome!! I really loved this. Too cute.
    Joe


  • OldBear34 silver member
    October 28
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    Nicely Done!

    Your rhyme scheme works well, as does the brevity of your poem, which seems to add to its impact.


  • Roseamongweeds
    October 28

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    So sweet, my little brother and my grandfather look almost exactly alike, just something that this poem made me think of! Great poem!


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 28
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    VERY CUTE!!!!

    I enjoyed this take on such a cute photo!

  • Bob Fox
    October 28
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    lol

    now i love this especially being a grandpa... love it poet. smiling here.

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