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Looking Past the Seasons

needing cool water on my back
as much as your warmth
laying near me
at three in the morning
when all i hear
is breathing
and planes flying overhead
it is nearing the end soon
of autumn leaves
anticipation of winter frost
and unique flakes
drifting
sometimes melting on my lips
while others survive the heat from my eyes
and i look back
only to step forward
wondering when i will see you once again

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  • DanielB
    November 3
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    Nicely written, sweet sentiments. And timely: I saw snowflakes out of my window today. November in Canada....


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 28

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    TOUCHING!!!

    The seasons keep coming and going and the sweet memories of each remind us of loved ones and our wonderful experiences with them.

    • luv2dream gold member
      October 28
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      thank you for your thoughts. i cannot wait til i get to be with those i care about the most.


  • Sweet-Sins
    October 28

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    hey this is great i feel the same
    i really liked it
    the last line is so true in my heart right now and the first two lines as well
    good write
    x

    • luv2dream gold member
      October 28
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      I'm glad you liked this and that you could relate..thank you!

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