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Aquamarine.....


Under the water and greenish waves ,
Floating on seaweeds that Neptune gave ,
Bubbles of yellow tangle her hair ,
Jewels of aqua on skin so fair .
Golden eyes glowing with ocean dreams ,
Glittering rings found under the sea ,
Undersea mermaid,emerald green...
Bluer than midnight,
Not many have seen .
Aquamarine...from under the waves ,
Do you visit Atlantis ,
And lost diamond caves?
Aquamarine...shimmering one,
Our heart is all yours ...
Our love you have won .
Under the sea ,
Under the sea ,
That is where we
Would all like to be .
Beautiful mermaid,
Glorious being .
You swim in our dreams...
And so sweetly sing .
Songs of the sailors
Lost far away ...
Songs of the dolphins,
As they frolic and play .
Aquamarine...so beautiful
Turkoise and yellow...
Glimmer below .
Shimmering ,
Glimmering ,
Exquisite green glow.

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  • bwderos
    November 12
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    this was really good i enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing


  • RainShatteredDreams
    October 28

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    Under the water and greenish waves ,
    Floating on seaweeds that Neptune gave ,
    Bubbles of yellow tangle her hair ,
    Jewels of aqua on skin so fair .
    Golden eyes glowing with ocean dreams ,
    Glittering rings found under the sea ,
    Undersea mermaid,emerald green...

    absoutloutley excellent way to begin the poem i really like it, good luck and thanks for entering

    -Mary-