The tonic of my life that keeps my blood from boiling
heats rapidly beneath the surface of my skin and cries
as swollen eyes beg freedom from the horrors they have seen
and wishes for a space within that doesn't crave caffine.
my vacant eyes fix solidly on a drem beyond the glass
wishing for one moment where the pain within will pass
but never will it cease becasue there's someone close that needs
my heart to fight for everything when hope and love receeds.
Burdened with a life that hurts with every breath
protected by her love that keeps me fighting death.
What did you think
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I like it. Alot of emotion behind it. But you didnt forget the a in dream. I dont know if it was meant or not but good all the same.
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im gussing this is sonnnettish? lol. never really wrote one..i dont think.lol. but this is very emotional. and great ending, it had an impact. good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥
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