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Words of imagination can swirl from the mind
as laughter and tears call as voices from the soul.
Life weaves round corners where talent may sleep
and gives breath to thought, fluttering with emotion.
Gift of wings fly with shape and colour profound
as chains that would bind and love that would dance
float in fine finesses.

Let the world explode here in a rainbow of a littered existence
as the pen scratches emotion that can mourn ineptness.
But there is a secret grace of purpose that begging to twirl with freedom,
to reflect notions and emotions that make up the inner core.

As silence blinks, language shouts its demands
and in powerful exploration there drips artisitic strength.



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  • Rovingone gold member
    November 4
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    A fitting rendition of the ideas of creativity. All full of motion and color.

  • This is absolutely awesome, words can't even give the right praise this deserves. Thank you so much for entering.

  • Macsword
    October 29

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    OOH!

    I liked lines 3 and 4 much. The write seems different, but it is a whole piece and I like the way it reads.


  • mgmc gold member
    October 28
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    Agree--this is excellent! Perfect for the prompt. Expressed beautifully.


  • penman gold member
    October 28

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    Excellent

    You captured the meaning so well. Your words weave the thoughts so marvelously. Best of luck in the contest

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