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in a moment's time

Like a glass about to fall
you beckoned to me
held me in a moment's thrall

you called to me
and I to you
as this dark glass fell from my hand
with a tinkling shattering crash
and that moment came to pass
time broken and held within
where and when will it once again begin
with my eyes
and heart
and hand held therein

I...

I am trapped in a moment's time
this nearly unbridled passion
of joy
at her mere image
freezing time
so I can give her visage its due of a moment of eternity

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  • Darianna
    November 6

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    Oh I agree! Time itself shatters when you lay your eyes on your ONE! Oh dear Demington! You are such the romantic! I love it ! You air the sentiments written upon my heart!

    Dari xxx


  • Renai
    October 31
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    Wow! You have what it takes to leave someone in complete awe.