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...Apples....


Oh the apple tree was glowing...
Full of blossoms lily white ,
Smelled so sweet,
You almost cried,
And the apples ...
Such a treat .
Rosy apples,tinged with green,
Fit to feed a fairy queen.
Rosy apples on the tree ...
Wish it was now...
So I could see...
Apples of the summertime ,
Oh I long for what was mine .
Childhood memories in the air,
Apple smell can take me there.
Apples, apples,every where ,
Sweep pink apples in the air ...
On branches high ,
They touch the sky .
Kissed by sun
And loved by one.

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