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Halloween Oil Party

One man comes in the name of oil
One girl dresses as a pretty dove
One boy dresses as an otter
One guy comes wrapped in foil
One chick comes looking for love.

They all learned the hard way
as each and every costume
became shrouded
in the Halloween
Parties atmosphere.
Some of the participants
played around the barrels
put out for an October's party

One girl became sick
as she brushed against oil
and the boy became covered
thick from bathing in
the barrels tumblr
and two of whom
were invited
became lost
in loves
power.

Its
fascinating
how fancy dress
brought about so much
happiness and how few incited
Such lawful offerings. How some
Disregarded each others wants at the party.
The price of which when against the grain of all their needs.

Because one man came from the core or town
and because one girl came from outside this pretty dynasty.
Because of one boy passing through the parties unwanted slipstream
The one guy in foil who had a dream; he must have been exuberant
of the parties inoculating atmosphere, protected by his top hat wrapped in foil
and the rain came and washed away his minds radiance as he ran across the road
like a little chicken, or so he believed to the rest it seemed he leaped and bound
more like a little toad. One girl thought about biting the apples from the bucket,
One guy thought about spiking the crispy coating, there's alway's one who walks
around with toffee teeth, the party always produces different types of memorable
emotions it's just a shame the outside world doesn't see this. It's just a shame the winter will come and Jack frost will get his wicked way; before Jack o Lantern
ever gets to see the light of day at the Halloween fancy Dress Party.

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  • ea silver member
    October 30

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    I like the idea of a bunch of people coming as oilslicked animals from some Exxon spill; environmentally aware. Sounds like a festive time was had by all in the final stanza, though on the other hand, it's a warning for global warming or am I way off base?


    • Robbwindow
      November 6
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      Before hell freezes over and traditional style of say something like oil on the surface never before seen form of dressing up outside the usual bundle of halloween. This poem or what probably is more like prose was a burst of uber fuel.