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Mary Jane

                                              Mary Jane                         Oct 2009
                                                (A Song)
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                                  Inside this heart of mine
                                  I’m dying just a little more each day
                                  And I just had to write you, one more time
                                  Let’s call it ‘one for the road’ ok?
                                  And while the seasons turn
                                  And the highways bend
                                  This broken heart of mine
                                  May learn to mend
                                  But I believe someday
                                  You’ll come back again,
                                  But if you can’t, I’ll understand
                                  But what I wanted to say,
                                  Was baby…
                          Chorus:
                                    I will remember you
                                    Long after this world is through
                                    As long as eternity
                                    You’ll always be a part of me
                                    And every time it rains
                                    All I have to do
                                    To make the sun shine through
                                    Is just remember you
                                    Mary Jane
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                                    You were the only one
                                    Who turned my dreams into reality
                                    But my dreams always seem to be on the run
                                    I guess that’s just the way
                                    That dreams were made to be
                                    Sometimes I think
                                    That I understand
                                    Sometimes I just don’t know
                                    Where I am
                                    Oh what I’d give right now
                                    For one last touch
                                    Of your hand
                                    Just one more night
                                    To hold you tight
                                    But if that’s not how it’s planned
                                    Baby…
                          Chorus:
                                    I will remember you
                                    Long after this world is through
                                    As long as eternity
                                    You’ll always be a part of me
                                    And every time it rains
                                    All I have to do
                                    To make the sun shine through
                                    Is just remember you
                                    Mary Jane
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                                    Now all that’s left are these
                                    Photographs I keep inside my mind
                                    They may be yesterdays’ memories
                                    But they’re all I have of what we left behind
                                    I know I’m living in
                                    The past it’s true
                                    But that’s the only place
                                    I can be with you
                                    And if you change your mind
                                    I’ll be there when you do
                                    While there’s a chance
                                    I must take it
                                    But just in case
                                    You can’t make it
                                    Baby…
                          Chorus:
                                    I will remember you
                                    Long after this world is through
                                    As long as eternity
                                    You’ll always be a part of me
                                    And every time it rains
                                    And I’m feeling blue
                                    Each time the sun shines through
                                    I will remember you
                                    Mary Jane
                                   


                                                       




















Copyright John Scott 2009

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The name Mary Jane is fictional, everything else is true

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  • Carinia
    November 11

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    OMG!!! that is sooooo good! I LOVE IT soooooo much! you're a legend


    • humblpye gold member
      November 12
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      Well as a matter of fact I am a legend lol but not the kind I'm too proud of...please read... The legend of Johnny Island...if you can't find it I'll send you the link, it's on my poem list
      Thanks for the awesome comment!
      John:-)♥

  • all faded blue
    November 11
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    I very much like this piece. It speaks of love, and the patience to wait, perhaps in vain for the return of the one loved. A bit different from the usual on here, and that I believe makes it special. Very nice indeed!


  • An.abrupt.ending
    November 11

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    Absolutely beautiful. Speaks to anyone who has loved and lost, and continued loving and waiting even after the photographs are so faded you can barely remember what they looked like to begin with.
    Heart wrenching and beautiful.

    • humblpye gold member
      November 11
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      Thank you for the reflective comment, I appreciate it very much


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 11

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    so happy this finally made the spot lite I know everyone will enjoy you song in  heart many hugs always ♥♥

    • humblpye gold member
      November 11
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      I appreciate your comment and support, thank you Angel!
      John


  • Love-Life-Live
    November 10
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    that was beautiful!!!


  • black rose society
    November 10

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    wow

    this is really something i loved reading it! great job

    ~jaydas~


  • wave1080
    November 10

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    Awwww !

    This is beautiful , I can relate to this


  • drifting cloud silver member
    October 29

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    I can feel the emotion of the singer here. Nice! Music is a wonderful extension of poetry. - Bonita


    • humblpye gold member
      November 11
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      Perhaps it's all one and the same thing really, just different names!

      Thank for the comment Bonita
      John


  • Jesann gold member
    October 28

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    "I know I'm living in
    The past it's true
    But that's the only place
    I can be with you"

    Memory is a wonderful thing...it holds amongst other things, treasures of immeasurable beauty....love being no exception.

    Beautifully expressed feelings and thought.


    • humblpye gold member
      October 29
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      It is indeed Anne, I guess we all carry memories around with us...keeping the past in the present as it were...!
      Thanks for stopping by!
      John


  • Sunshine Always
    October 28

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    Well John you have excelled yourself here in this heartbreakingly very meaningful piece. So many will understand and relate to your words ...Bless you...mal


    • humblpye gold member
      October 28
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      Thank you Mal, I really didn't expect all this, but I'm very appreciative for the response...
      John


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    October 28

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    This is so hauntingly beautiful J-J. It is a beautiful song and one that is meant to be sung that is for sure. I would love to hear it one day. Pam


    • humblpye gold member
      October 28
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      It is sung Pam, in my heart and on my ol beat up guitar...
      Thank you my friend
      John


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 28
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    OMG John this is so stunning for I drink the words in song you penned for your heart carried the essence on words written I am reading again to drink in the soul penned,, for just in case you cant make it will remember you... this is stunning so beautiful makes the tears come.. so sad in its own right but you have penned the heart that makes it live inside.. thank you dear John for each words has touched me in so many ways .. you are such a gem forever I call you my freind Hugs always dear soul Angel♥*hugs*♥♥


  • katie marie silver member
    October 28
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    Beautiful lyrics. Wish I could hear it sung.


    • humblpye gold member
      October 28
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      I wouldn't know how to do that on here lol...it's not recorded onto anything but I can sing it!
      Thank you for coming by!
      John


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 28

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    here you go again John

    your heart and soul are showing brilliantly

     

    you have quite a sensitive soul

     

    and it shines through your words

     

    beautiful write!!!! great lyrics!!!!!

    God bless you my friend...

    • humblpye gold member
      October 28
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      Lady Rainbow!
      I do thank you for your ever thoughtfull words!
      John


  • waydownuponjoy
    October 28

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    ...one for the road!

    and while I've heard that before this one takes on a whole new meaning with your sweet song of remembrance. I liked it and it reminds me just how love finds a way into a heart and there's no U-turn from that. I hope you have a tune for these lyrics and you'll start singing them for your fictional friend. jy


    • humblpye gold member
      October 28
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      Yep, this is a complete song, I play it in C major there's a lot of minor chords in it too...
      Thanks Joy for the nice comment!
      Jhn

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