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Spoken

Silence speaking

Voiceless tongue

Feelings weakening

Thoughts undone

Traceless words

Soon disappear

Often disturbs

Echoes there

Hearing shadows

Whispers die

Fall below

Deafened cry...

c2009

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  • vivuyo
    November 4

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    there is that so called deafening silence....

    this composition needs an anaysis in order to understand.

    a ve nice pice..short but meaningful!!
    congrats!!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 28

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    how do we see the light if all is light?

    only through the darkness we see light

     

    below means there is an above

     

    God has given us hope through His pointers

     

    well done my friend

    God bless you...