i feel hallow and empty inside
shatter the breathing shell that i am
allow me to fall to pieces
just like my mind is doing now
i feel utterly abandoned
no one close to lean on
my supporting shoulder, gone
my thoughts are no more
scattered to the winds
my body feels empty
no feelings left inside me
this glassy-eyed gaze of mine
sees nothing through this fog
whats the point of an empty existence?
i feel no joy, no sorrow, nothing
please, break this shell
this life isnt worth living like this
i want to crumble to millions of shards
slip throught the cracks in the ground
and forever disappear without a trace
why won't you break me?
please, i beg you to...
break me!!
i dont want this life
someone end it for me, please!
please.... please..
just end me
Author notes
random thoughts... personal... dont bother asking since u dont really care
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Comments
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Who says I don't care? XP I DO! STOP PRETENDING!!! =]
*comment nazi marches in*
the first line should be hollow. unless you were going for hallowed, but that doesn't sound right. ;P I know it's a personal poem so I won't bother with ther editor's notes. =] -
"and i feel so hollow like a traped soul inside of a deperate heart"
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wow this is really good !!!
it reminds me of some lyrics from my fav band
wich makes it even better!!!!!
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